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Hi Henry this is a great piece of prescriptive writing it is so detailed and full of great words, I love the joke at the end. But it does go off the page so if you do it again if you copy and paste it on the blog you can copy link. but other from that it is great.
hi Henry I think that you did so well I read your story and it had so many descriptive words and so many great sentences. but as jade said it did go of the page
Hi Henry. I think that the life cycle of stars was a very interesting topic and it was a great idea to do.I like that you have your paragraphs when it's in the right place to put them.But I'm just asking do you think the pictures are the right ones to use in your writing. Anais
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Hi Henry this is a great piece of prescriptive writing it is so detailed and full of great words, I love the joke at the end.
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hi Henry I think that you did so well I read your story and it had so many descriptive words and so many great sentences. but as jade said it did go of the page
ReplyDeleteHi Henry. I think that the life cycle of stars was a very interesting topic and it was a great idea to do.I like that you have your paragraphs when it's in the right place to put them.But I'm just asking do you think the pictures are the right ones to use in your writing. Anais
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